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You Think I'da Learned By Now

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I've run away from bigger people
But i really didn't know back then
That you've been telling me what to do
In case I'd have to face those men.
It's clear to me that you have seen
The darker side to life and death
So why complain about having no friends
Since you were there to give me strength.
Grab ahold of me ' cause I slip too fast
You know those things consume like fire
A pillar of strength and a buddy to limp with
Is all I could ever desire.
Too bad I trip more times than the lame
And my eyes look towards the worthless crowd
I know what you're thinking, yeah, I know.
You'd think I'da learned by now.
What a shame.
It's suppossed to say ''You'd Think I'da Learned By Now'' but the title bar ain't big enough. watevr...

I'da=I would have/of
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Pcflstrm2's avatar
I like this. I get the point. It doesn't all flow smoothly as far as rhyme and rhythm. Example: I don't hear the connection between - cause I slip too fast, and the line more times than the lame. My mind has a hard time connecting the placement of it. But it's good. Kim